Date: 08 Jul 2008 6:36 pm Title: Anger management, anyone?
There were mulitople grammatical mistakes, the characters were too contrived and stereotyped. It felt like it lacked substance.
Author's Response: Yeah I know. But this is in my early stages of writting and when I didn't have the knack of writting I have now. That's why it's so crappy and stuff. But I wanted to upload it because I thought it was fun.