Reviews For Angel's Call
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Reviewer: Siriusmunchkin Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 2:13 am Title: Chapter 1

Not necessarily that farfetched that in his delirius state he would see the angel who would save him at a future time. Time means nothing when you're dying or living as a vampire.

Reviewer: dsolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2008 6:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very sweet.

Reviewer: LuckyBella Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2008 6:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really liked this, it wsa very original. However, might I suggest getting rid of that last line? By stating what really happened, you lose the magical, ambiguous feel, though most readers are probably able to figure out what you meant anyway, and so in a way that explanatory sentence is almost insulting. Anyway, just something to think about. Nice job!

Reviewer: DelilahBlueEyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2008 3:43 am Title: Chapter 1

That's a beautiful inight to the inner workings of Edwards twisted and complicated life! Amazing story!

Reviewer: m9organ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2008 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was amazing! I loved it!

Reviewer: anonymousgirl94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2008 4:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

hmmmmm strange what do you call it hmmm v-good but strange

Reviewer: JulietsSilentNurse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2008 3:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

I don't know what to say. This is just so cute and perfect.
Bella saves Edward before the is even born, even before they met!
There is so much love in this story. It's so lovely, I can't even come up with good criticism.

Reviewer: Angel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2008 4:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

almost died (laughing) again! awesome!

Reviewer: NoMoreThanUsual Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2008 2:44 am Title: Chapter 1

What a neat story! Very creative. And very sweet!

Reviewer: Midnight_Star Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2008 7:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

AWWW so cute!!
I love Bella and Edward fluff!
this was really good.

Author's Response: I love edward/bella fulff too, so i just had to write fluff :) thank you

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