Date: 25 Feb 2007 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
It is really amazing how you were able to write from her unique POV. I think that between the fever and the trama of Edward dying, that she would be a little nuts. You introduced Carlisle nicely, I love how she refers to him as an Angel, like Bella does with Edward.
Date: 22 Feb 2007 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful! I really got a good idea of how she felt before, during, and after her encounters with Carlisle. And I really got a feel of how much she cared for Edward. Wonderful job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Thanks for pointing out which parts you like- it definitely helps! Thanks again!!