Reviews For Blood Lust
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Reviewer: abbyweyr Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2011 7:53 pm Title: Will You Still Love Me

You did a good job with the mixed emotions and her questions. 

Reviewer: abbyweyr Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 11:09 pm Title: Perfection

Nice.  "best when wrapped around my own" and "like right now over mine"  really nice.

Reviewer: abbyweyr Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2011 11:06 pm Title: Lost

This one is a little confusing to me. Who is the she that sees time sway?  Alice?  Seems like this could be either Bella or Edward to me.

Author's Response: Yes it's Alice on your first question and it's Bella who is thinking all of this. She's wondering what Edward is hiding from her all that time when the Cullens go missing and he starts to avoid her more and more.

Reviewer: abbyweyr Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 5:00 pm Title: On a Leash

This is really good.  You have a great way to putting Edward's internal conflict into words.  Looking forward to more in Edward's POV or others. 

Author's Response: My next one is a different person..but hopefully you'll like it, too.

Reviewer: abbyweyr Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 8:23 am Title: Blood Lust

Nice way of expressing how Edward feels torn between the thirst and love and realizing that Bella is bringing out his humanity. 

Author's Response: Glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: Mosteevo Stugg Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 3:00 am Title: Blood Lust

hey, just came across a new twilight video, thought it might give you guys a kick!

Reviewer: tds88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2010 4:52 am Title: Blood Lust

Everything is always in Bella's perspective. This was a breath of fresh air. It's a way to get a fix on my addiction. So thank you.

Author's Response: If you want, I do have more poems that go with this lol I haven't been on here in forever XD but I can make an effort to get back into it more.

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