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Reviewer: Kagey Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

It's interesting to see this from Charlies POV, equating it with what happened to him when Renee left

Reviewer: xxangelxx Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2009 2:38 pm Title: Chapter 1


Reviewer: Lady G Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2009 2:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

love seeing charlies feelings

Reviewer: Aliceiscool Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2009 8:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

This really explains his feelings. Nicely done. I like it.

Reviewer: lexi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2009 1:27 am Title: Chapter 1

Nicely written

Reviewer: simoney7713 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2009 12:08 am Title: Chapter 1

Hey!! Really good job!! This is totally what I thought Charlie would be like!!

Reviewer: Iisalicecullen2378 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2008 2:03 am Title: Chapter 1

woah... an unexpected twist in the new moon story....

Reviewer: dsolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2008 9:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very good job of capturing Charlie's POV.

Reviewer: Another Cullen Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2008 12:05 am Title: Chapter 1

Very good

Reviewer: writergirl17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2008 3:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

It was really good. I liked the way you wrote it from Charlie's POV...It really opened my eyes to what he was probably feeling...Poor Charlie...
The only problem was a couple of run-on sentences, but otherwise, great job!

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