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Categories: Eclipse
Characters: Bella Swan Cullen, Carlisle Cullen, Edward Cullen
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3924 Read Count: 3529
Date: 12 Apr 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
oh goodness, that was FANTASTIC! It seemed so perfect, so poetic and characterized and...perfect. i wish i could write half as well as that.
Date: 12 Apr 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
oh goodness, that was FANTASTIC! It seemed so perfect, so poetic and characterized and...perfect. i wish i could write half as well as that.
Categories:
Characters: Esme Cullen, Rosalie Hale
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2732 Read Count: 1966
Date: 16 May 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Wow. I don't know if I can say just how much I love this. I could almost hear the music in your words, as if you put crescendos in the next-to-last line, and a chord on the last one. and then the real last line of the whole thing...wow. what a roaring finish. my favorite line was "She comes to death with shrieks of fury". well, except for the last "Lazarus, come forth", which made my heart stop.
Categories: Eclipse
Characters: Bella Swan Cullen, Edward Cullen, Jacob Black
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2630 Read Count: 2221
Date: 16 May 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Bella
mmmh, i love that you didn't make their lists identical. it would have seemed logical, and yet, in retrospect, cheesy. but you made them different, which elevates the whole concept from them being perfect lovebirds, to two individuals with different frames of mind who once existed separately from each other. you made it so realistic.
Date: 16 May 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Bella
mmmh, i love that you didn't make their lists identical. it would have seemed logical, and yet, in retrospect, cheesy. but you made them different, which elevates the whole concept from them being perfect lovebirds, to two individuals with different frames of mind who once existed separately from each other. you made it so realistic.
Categories: Art
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1 Read Count: 1244
Date: 03 Apr 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
he looks a little like heath ledger...
Author's Response: Do you really think so? I thought he looked more like the guy from Kyle XY
Categories: Twilight
Characters: Bella Swan Cullen, Edward Cullen
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 459 Read Count: 1817
Date: 03 Apr 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
you kept changing between present tense and past tense here. a nice idea and nice point of view, tho.
Author's Response: Oops... did I?
I\'ll have to go back and edit it.
But thanks!
Categories: Art
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61 Read Count: 1680
Date: 03 Apr 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Bite
ah, but she was wearing a tanktop, not a collared shirt, was she?...very nice though...edward reminds me of some oldie glamarous actor, but i can't say which...
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Categories: New Moon
Characters: Edward Cullen
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1046 Read Count: 1633
Date: 07 Jun 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I think it's absolutely perfect except for two things...
1) "He felt less like a vampire tempted by his ultimate prey, and so much more like a man reunited with his lost lover"...I think that would sound better if you said "a man reunited with his heart"...more poetic...but of course that's extremely subjective and not really my place to say.
2) You HAVE to continue this. Please?? Just the rest of New Moon? How he felt during the vote?
"She is ours. One of us will have our way sooner or later. What is unsure is whether it will be a time to love or a time to kill."
Categories: Twilight
Characters: Edward Cullen
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 710 Read Count: 1044
Date: 21 Jun 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
wow, this is very good. very good. i like the psychological viewpoint of it. all very philosophical, really. i liked it a lot. =)