Penname: BlueSea14 Real name: Rose
Member Since: 30 Jul 2007
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I'm (just) a teenager in California, and I absolutely love the Twilight series. Fanfiction. Net is where most of my acton is, however, since I have not been invited to post any of my AU Twilight stories here. (And of course, because I have some Harry Potter, Maximum Ride, Speak and Supernatural fics there, which are obviously not Twilight). :)

On Fanfiction. Net I have my Twilight fanfiction stories: "Curse", "Darkest Before Dawn", "Hear No Evil", "Story of My Life" and (someday) the other three parts of "SomL" which are, as of yet, unnamed.

I truly hope that even though they haven't been invited here (although one of my fondest wishes is for at least "Hear No Evil" to come join "Sunrise" here), you might take the time to check them out there.

For as proud as I am of my baby, "Sunrise" , I still love my other stories and want them to have just as much attention and not be overshadowed by a story that I began on a whim and needs quite a bit of work and attention. :)

Thank you!
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Carnage by Pelirroja Rated: PG13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 86]
Summary: Bella's clumsiness claims new victims.
Categories: Twilight
Characters: Alice Cullen, Carlisle Cullen, Edward Cullen, Emmett Cullen, Esme Cullen, Rosalie Hale
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2114 Read Count: 1768
[Report This] Published: 13 Jun 2006 Updated: 13 Jun 2006
Reviewer: BlueSea14 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Aug 2007 Title: Chapter 1: carnage

Great job! :) This is one of my favorite one-shots when it was back on Fanfiction.Net but I can't find it there anymore. LOL. :)

In the second paragraph, about midway, you wrote "back luck" - I think that's supposed to be "bad luck". And a few more down, I'm almost certain that "passed" is supposed to be "past". I'm not sure about that one, though...:) It just sounds right to me.

But anyway, great job! Loved it! And I'm just a stickler for the spelling - I hate it when I don't see my own mistakes and always try to overcompensate by telling others theirs. Sorry. :)

Awakenings by Pelirroja Rated: PG13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 164]
Summary: Carlise and Esme and how it all began.
Categories: Pre-Twilight
Characters: Carlisle Cullen, Edward Cullen, Esme Cullen
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14182 Read Count: 15577
[Report This] Published: 13 Jun 2006 Updated: 18 Dec 2008
Reviewer: BlueSea14 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Please, write more soon! I love this story - it's so heart-wrenching and much more enjoyable than anything I've seen others picture in the way of Carlisle and Esme's relationship, in the beginning of them knowing one another. I really enjoy this story! :)

Unyielding by Taxi Rated: PG13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 145]
Summary: Bella is confronted by an old enemy that may threaten the Cullen's happy life in Forks. (Pre-New Moon)
Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25780 Read Count: 15935
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2006 Updated: 12 Oct 2006
Reviewer: BlueSea14 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Aug 2007 Title: Chapter 11: A Display

Very good! This was one of my favorites on old Fanfiction.Net - I'm so glad I found it again! :)
I've always wondered, though - did Bella ever tell Edward that this was one of the men who tried to hurt her in Port Angeles, or does he already know that?

Summary: Edward is hunting and sends Emmett to keep an eye on Bella. An exploration into Bella and Emmett's relationship.
Categories: New Moon
Characters: Edward Cullen, Emmett Cullen
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4300 Read Count: 3559
[Report This] Published: 18 Jan 2007 Updated: 24 Jan 2007
Reviewer: BlueSea14 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Aug 2007 Title: Chapter 2: When An Angel Sleeps

I loved this. It was very beautiful, and I enjoyed reading it. I don't think Bella would really play a joke like that on Emmett - it doesn't really seem like her style. But at the same time, it did work with the story. :) Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. I admit the joke was a little bit of a stretch, but I can see them developing that sort of relationship. We know Emmett likes to poke fun at her. Even though we haven\'t seen it yet in the books, I can\'t imagine it will be very long before she starts poking back.

Summary: Summary - What if Edward and Bella really existed? What if someone want to share the love between Edward and Bella with the world? What if Stephenie Meyer’s dream was not by chance but through the manipulation of someone who wanted this story shared? What is their real story, and who wanted to share their story? This story will be update and then continued if I find a way to do it.
Categories: Alternative Universe
Characters: Alice Cullen, Bella Swan Cullen, Carlisle Cullen, Edward Cullen, Emmett Cullen, Esme Cullen, Rosalie Hale
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 74 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 378929 Read Count: 161960
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2007 Updated: 22 Dec 2011
Reviewer: BlueSea14 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Vampirism 101 - B

This chapter (3) was rather interesting to read. I'm a bit confused about why the first two chapters were written in the way they were, while here it starts a journal, but I did like it nonetheless. I liked this chapter, however, because the basic "Vampires for Dummies" setup was interesting. I liked how you thought it all out and wrote down everything about vampries like this, in your AU version. :)

Author's Response: Thank you, I\'m glad you are enjoying this story. I hope you will enjoy the rest of the chapters that are currently posted, and I promise, there is more to come.

Summary: Esme's point of view as she tries to give Edward some advice on his relationship with Bella. But, of course, Edward doesn't really want to listen, and it falls on deaf ears like always.
Categories: Twilight
Characters: Edward Cullen, Esme Cullen
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1579 Read Count: 1211
[Report This] Published: 15 Apr 2007 Updated: 15 Apr 2007
Reviewer: BlueSea14 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Paint The Silence

Very good! I liked it a lot! You are a good writer! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m so glad you liked it.

Summary: I was working on another story (Beginning of Forever) and thinking about why the Cullens would specifically not like Jessica and Lauren, but would like Angela. This story just started to kind of write itself. It's the history (not necessarily in chronological order or anything) of the Forks girls and their run-ins with the Cullens, and Bella, of course!
Categories:
Characters: Alice Cullen, Angela Weber, Charlie Swan, Edward Cullen, Emmett Cullen, Eric Yorkie, Esme Cullen, Jacob Black, Jessica Stanley, Lauren Mallory, Mike Newton, Rosalie Hale, Tyler Crowley
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5992 Read Count: 4488
[Report This] Published: 27 Apr 2007 Updated: 06 Sep 2007
Reviewer: BlueSea14 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Nausea

I'm so glad you finally updated! :) I love this story.
I really liked the Jessica characterization. It was very good, and I was laughing during the times poor Edward had to deal with the nauseating thoughts of Jessica. :) Even though that sounds totally sadistic...
Great job!

Summary: A pic of how I picture Bella. :)
Categories: Art
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1 Read Count: 1211
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2007 Updated: 09 Jun 2007
Reviewer: BlueSea14 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Aug 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Bella

It's beautiful! I love her outfit - and did Alice force her into those high heels? :) I like her hair, especially - just how I've always pictured it! :)

Author's Response: haha, yes she did. :)

Overnighter by Eowyn77 Rated: PG13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 378]
Summary: Bella confronts a secret from Edward's past when he goes on an overnight hunting trip with his family. (Hint: Denali)



Written before the release of Eclipse.
Categories: New Moon
Characters: Alice Cullen, Carlisle Cullen, Carmen, Charlie Swan, Edward Cullen, Eleazar, Emmett Cullen, Esme Cullen, Irina, Kate (Katrina), Rosalie Hale, Tanya
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: The Denali Coven
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16328 Read Count: 27640
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2007 Updated: 19 Jul 2007
Reviewer: BlueSea14 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2007 Title: Chapter 12: Loose Ends

Wonderful! Absolutely hilarious - I was falling off my seat with laughter as I read this! I loved it! You really did a great job on this!

Author's Response: LOL Falling off your seat? SWEET! :D Thanks so much, BlueSea!

Reviewer: BlueSea14 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2007 Title: Chapter 13: Closing the story

Hey! Did you get the mass e-mail Pel sent? She said that if you wrote something before Eclipse came out that now contradicts the story, you DON'T have to take your story down. You just have to put in the summary that you wrote this pre-Eclipse.
Please don't delete this! I really enjoyed this story, and the companion piece to it!
You did great on this, by the way. :) Love it!

Author's Response: I just got the email, BlueSea! :) Thanks for the encouragement! Overnighter and Fair Game will both stay, but I won\'t be writing any more on them. My feelings toward Laurant at this point echo Edward\'s. :P