Date: 14 May 2010 1:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Interesting friends you've just made Carlisle. Considerate of them to want to provide you with a snack. Then again I wouldn't trust Jane as far as I could throw her, and if she smiles at you it's not because she wants to be buddies.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 3:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Very good, but Aro would have recognized that Carlisle was different by his eyes. He would have probably satisfied his curiosity before offering anything else. Also, it's not quite canon (see Breaking Dawn), but I can't fault you for that. Other than that, I enjoyed it very much.
Date: 29 Jul 2009 11:20 am Title: Chapter 1
This was great. I wish you would have written more. It would have been nice to read your take on Carlisle's "stay with the Volturi".
Author's Response: Thanks for reading & reviewing!! I tend to write very infrequently so I never got around to delving into the fun possibilities of Carlisle's visit. Maybe eventually...
Date: 04 Dec 2008 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love hearing Carlisle's point of view. This was really interesting; I love how you filled in such believable details from the few things we know. Good job!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was a lot of fun to write and put my own spin on things. Thanks for your review!!