Date: 09 Jun 2010 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very well written.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2008 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Powerful depiction of desperation.
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2008 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
it's very good, the way she is so clearly dying. the pov captures the scattered thoughts well.
Date: 21 Jan 2008 1:53 am Title: Chapter 1
Great job! Very sad!!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2007 4:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
You have shown me the light...*meditates*
Thank you, This was very good. Elizabeth is a lot like Esme, huh?
Great job.
Date: 01 May 2007 8:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was great. It made me cry. Your a good writer.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2007 7:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
My gosh! The was awesome, and partially sad. It's amazing really how no one else thought to write from Elizabeth's pov.
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2007 6:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
It is really amazing how you were able to write from her unique POV. I think that between the fever and the trama of Edward dying, that she would be a little nuts. You introduced Carlisle nicely, I love how she refers to him as an Angel, like Bella does with Edward.
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2007 5:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful! I really got a good idea of how she felt before, during, and after her encounters with Carlisle. And I really got a feel of how much she cared for Edward. Wonderful job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Thanks for pointing out which parts you like- it definitely helps! Thanks again!!