Date: 21 Nov 2010 3:37 am Title: Chapter 1
This is the funniest piece I've ever read. My stomach hurts. Not sure if the rating is accurate. Going on my favorites. Very much in character for all of them. When will Edward learn? If he had used them, there wouldn't be any Breaking Dawn. too funny.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
One of the best (and funniest) pieces of fan fiction I've seen. This story is inspired. It works brilliantly because the Cullens are written so convincingly in character, but thrown into a ridiculous situation. It was a master stroke to incorporate Edward's well known tendancy to overthink things. There was no need to drag anyone else into his descision making process. As usual his desire to be conscientious proved to be his undoing.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 3:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Hi! I think I've read quite sa few of your fics on FFN. I adore your writing, you're the best I've read so far! Sorry I haven't reviewed before I normally read w my mobile phone and it won't let me log into FFN, can't read the dumb security image. But I just wanted you to know you are amazingly talented and whenever I read fic on a regular computer, I will let ya know when I read & love your stories!
Date: 18 May 2010 4:56 am Title: Chapter 4
This is just getting more hilarius with every chapter. They are not going to let Edward off easy. And he thinks it can't get worse? Someone's going to walk in the store that he really, really doesn't want to see. Jacob maybe?