Date: 12 Jul 2011 3:53 pm Title: Will You Still Love Me
You did a good job with the mixed emotions and her questions.
Date: 09 Jan 2011 6:09 pm Title: Perfection
Nice. "best when wrapped around my own" and "like right now over mine" really nice.
Date: 09 Jan 2011 6:06 pm Title: Lost
This one is a little confusing to me. Who is the she that sees time sway? Alice? Seems like this could be either Bella or Edward to me.
Author's Response: Yes it's Alice on your first question and it's Bella who is thinking all of this. She's wondering what Edward is hiding from her all that time when the Cullens go missing and he starts to avoid her more and more.
Date: 03 Jan 2011 12:00 pm Title: On a Leash
This is really good. You have a great way to putting Edward's internal conflict into words. Looking forward to more in Edward's POV or others.
Author's Response: My next one is a different person..but hopefully you'll like it, too.
Date: 02 Nov 2010 4:23 am Title: Blood Lust
Nice way of expressing how Edward feels torn between the thirst and love and realizing that Bella is bringing out his humanity.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it :)
Date: 18 Oct 2010 11:00 pm Title: Blood Lust
hey, just came across a new twilight video, thought it might give you guys a kick! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VDhDZcYixVA
Date: 14 Oct 2010 12:52 am Title: Blood Lust
Everything is always in Bella's perspective. This was a breath of fresh air. It's a way to get a fix on my addiction. So thank you.
Author's Response: If you want, I do have more poems that go with this lol I haven't been on here in forever XD but I can make an effort to get back into it more.