Date: 11 Oct 2009 7:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
You have really brought out the fear and dread the family and friends of Rosalie must have felt. To think that black-hearted Royce would sit with them almost makes you want to jump in and push him back and away from them. Do you think Vera and Michael blame themselves for not being sure Rose got home OK? Seems her father might feel that way. It was very interesting.
Date: 28 Mar 2009 7:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
wow, i first reviewed this story in october and didn't know that you planned to continue. i'm pleased that you did - it feels like i've been transported to another time. do continue =)
Author's Response: I plan to have a few more chapters. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 28 Mar 2009 4:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
Aw. :/ That was sad. Well done, though. The only concrit I can offer is that there was a lot of dialogue, which is kind of...meh. Other than that, excellent.
Author's Response: Yeah, I didn't want to do a lot of personal narrative until I got into Vera's head better. Thanks.