Date: 29 Dec 2008 8:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Unabomber, eh? I don't have a very good handle on Mike, but this seemed to fit fairly well.
The last two lines were pretty chilling.
Author's Response: I grabbed the most current thing that would be a close-to-home threat and refer to the quiet, dangerous type. Thanks for the "fairly well." The last two lines were more wistful than chilling, but thanks!
Date: 29 Dec 2008 8:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like this! I think you should maybe add another chapter. Maybe you can do Mike's reaction to seeing her that night, and then a little bit of what he thinks when she finally comes back to school a week later. And you know what would really rock? His reaction to Edward coming back. Nice job with this!
Author's Response: Thanks for really liking it! There will be other Mike stories, but not as chapters to this. See "Saving Face" if you're interested in mre. I may do his reaction to Edward's return. Thanks again!