[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2010 3:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Not bad at all! Felt like I was with them looking for her!
Date: 20 May 2010 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Mike is a nice normal guy here, I like it. He's always nice but usually a little whacked because he's obsessed with getting Bella as a girlfriend.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 8:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Nice story, i liked it.
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2009 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
poor poor mike. i think i feel sorry for him
Author's Response: I've occasionally felt sorry for him and really do like him on occasion.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2008 5:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow
for some reason it makes me wanting more...
really good fanfic!
Author's Response: That's how I like it. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2008 3:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Unabomber, eh? I don't have a very good handle on Mike, but this seemed to fit fairly well.
The last two lines were pretty chilling.
Author's Response: I grabbed the most current thing that would be a close-to-home threat and refer to the quiet, dangerous type. Thanks for the "fairly well." The last two lines were more wistful than chilling, but thanks!
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2008 3:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like this! I think you should maybe add another chapter. Maybe you can do Mike's reaction to seeing her that night, and then a little bit of what he thinks when she finally comes back to school a week later. And you know what would really rock? His reaction to Edward coming back. Nice job with this!
Author's Response: Thanks for really liking it! There will be other Mike stories, but not as chapters to this. See "Saving Face" if you're interested in mre. I may do his reaction to Edward's return. Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2008 1:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Insightful. Nice perspective on the much maligned Mike Newton.
Author's Response: LOL, poor Mike. He really is much-maligned. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2008 1:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Interesting take from the searchers viewpoint. Good job.
Author's Response: Thanks for finding it interesting. I had a few plot bunnies on who to 'voice' it, but Mike was the most interesting to me.
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2008 12:35 am Title: Chapter 1
You always fill in the blanks in such surprising, yet 'real' ways.
Author's Response: Thanks, such a! I'm very glad that they are 'real' ways.